OKay
Now I love your story but your animation skills need to be built before you take a project like this again. The motion tweening was sloppy and the colors were plain. I suggest working on small stuff to get your drawing animation skills up before you try something this good again...
I say this to help you.. Your poor animation is distracting from the substance of the film...
But hey dont let me discourage you from animating. I did some terrible animations too.. in the beginning...
All I am saying is well get better everything else like sound is great..